Go-Cart Frenzy

My dad had my brother and I for the weekend, so we visited our cousins that lived in South Carolina. They were planning catching up on good times. My brother and I were trying to see what they had new. We got there, my dad went in the living room, and the kids went outside. one of our cousins was fat so we couldn't play tag because he had asthma. So we sat around and got bored and one of them said they had a go-cart but it wouldn't start. We went over beside the building and uncovered the go-cart. I sat on the set but I thought it would be wet because of the rain from earlier, but it wasn't because of the cover that was over it. I had my foot on the gas and steering wheel, I was turning and pushing the gas like I was in a real NASCAR. My brother was messing with the motor and he pulled the starter rope like three times and on the fourth try, I heard it rumble! It took off because I had my foot on the gas. I was going mad fast, then I seen a tree. It was two trees and A bench in the middle. I swerved so I wouldn't hit the tree, then swerved again so I wouldn't hit the bench, the AGAIN so I wouldn't hit the other tree! I was on a rampage! My cousins mother came outside and said put it up because we didn't ask to ride. But when I got off it and looked back! It was tire skids EVERYWHERE! I almosted killed myself on a go-cart. That was my first time ever riding a go-cart and I think I did pretty good for a beginner.

ELA Showcase

My top three posts: Blind Side, Love, Dog Run

Best Example of creativity: Blind Side, Because I named it the same name as a Movie!

Evidence of my growth as a writer: Blind Side, I am doing a better job with descriptive things.

Proof I Am a thinker/writer: Blind Side, I went back in forth in the story and that took thinking.

Dog Run

You ever been chased by a dog?  How about have you gotten bitten by one?  I don’t know about y’all but when I see a dog running after me, I’m GONE.  I don’t have time to say a dogs running, I just go.  Well one day Julian and I were walking down the street and playing dodge rock then out of no where heard a bunch of moving behind me.  I Glanced behind me and that was all  it took... It was a DOG, I thought i never ran so fast like that in my life!  I was ballin and Julez was behind me.  We got back to my house and was thinking about getting revenge on the dog, since it was a stray.  I found a turkey baster when I was washing dishes, then he was said we can stick it up the dogs booty and inject something in him.  So We went to the bathroom and peed in the toilet (Not at the same time), poured Clorox in it, Epsom salt , soap, Lysol, and ear cleaner!  Julez filled the turkey baster up with our concoction, I took the trash out and then we left.  

We Walked down the street not knowing if the dog was going to come out or not but we were prepared.  We seen Alyia across the street, and that’s when the dog came!  He ran up on us and Alyia called Julez’s name at the last minute-I found a bottle on the side of the road and was going to hit the dog if it tried to bite me-she called right when I threw the bottle because it tried to bite me.  It hit the dogs leg and he ran away whining!  Alyia messed it all up!  She just HAD to call his name.  Every time I see that dog now he runs away with his tail between his legs!  That’s why I don’t mess with a lot of dogs.  

P.S.A. (Public Service Announcement) Okay, I’m not an insane person.  But it was a crazy idea... I DON’T have any issues! 

Love

Love is a strong word, and some people use it to play around with.  You may say when that you were alive people remember you as a someone that will sacrifice them self for someone else. You love your best-friend, but when you say love what do you mean?  I think of love as a meaning to give your life or soul for someone else to live on that you care for.  That’s REAL love.  When you care enough to give your life for another person, That’s like remembrance, when you we word is used with different meanings, But it depends on how serious you are.  Like these love stories-

One night a guy and a girl were driving home from the movies. The boy sensed there was something wrong because of the painful silence they shared between them that night. The girl then asked the boy to pull over because she wanted to talk. She told him that her feelings had changed & that it was time to move on.

A silent tear slid down his cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket & passed her a folded note.

At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. He swerved right into the drivers seat, killing the boy. Miraculously, the girl survived. Remembering the note, she pulled it out & read it. "Without your love, I would die."-

Love Means... (a girl and guy were speeding over 100 mph on a motorcycle)

Girl: Slow down. I'm scared.

Guy: No this is fun.

Girl: No its not. Please, it's too scary!

Guy: Then tell me you love me.

Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down! Guy: Now give me a big hug. (Girl hugs him)

Guy: Can you take my helmet off and put it on? It's bugging me.

In the paper the next day: A motorcycle had crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on the motorcycle, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn't want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him, felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so she would live even though it meant he would die.

    When you care or have deep feelings for someone like that, that’s real love.

Blind Side

     When I was like 5 or 6 years old my brother played football.  The game was over & my brother had to go do something, it was dark so he gave me his helmet, pads & football gear.  I put it on a bench somewhere  & went off.  When we were about to leave he asked for his things back & I told him I put them down somewhere & forgot where.  It was a dark, cool misty night, no lights anywhere in plain sight.  As I was running I seen it & got over, I ran faster to hurry.  As I got closer & closer & CLOSER!  As I was almost there, & all of a sudden I was on the ground!  When I got up & looked, it Was a fence I ran into!  I hurt my back, face, & arm.  It was a huge fence, how could I not see it!?! 

I've had a history for running into things-

When my brother & I was younger we couldn't leave the yard with our bikes, so we raced around the house.  We always had a gravel driveway so we would slide on the rocks using our brakes.  Well my brother always beat me because he was older than me, but this time was different, I was going to win!  It was the last lap around the house & I passed my brother!  I had to come around the corner of the house on the gravel.  I was almost there just turn the corner & its over, I got really excited & leaned over like the real motorcycle racers in a turn.  I was about to win!  I looked up & it was over!  BAM!  I hit the corner of the house with my head!  The bike kept going but I Fell, I was hurt really bad & messed up my head-& that's how I have a history of running into things!

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The Hunger Games

I Think Katness is going to win The Hunger Games by a close call because if they made a alliance then Katness is has to work 3times Harder then she usually does. Katness hasn't killed anyone Yet! But if it comes to the end and Katness & Peeta is still alive I think Katness is going to kill Peeta & Win the Hunger Games.